Heather, The 1st and 3rd pages are your strongest. There is a complete focus and dedication to describing the figures completely - yet simply through line. Please work in this direction. Try to draw the figure in motion more. Static poses are fine but this course is about movement and how we capture it in a drawing. Avoid line fills - use line to describe form and light - not color and tone. Nice tree contour on page 3 - ground it in space by incorporating some grass or leaf elements below it. Good work.
Heather,
ReplyDeleteThe 1st and 3rd pages are your strongest. There is a complete focus and dedication to describing the figures completely - yet simply through line.
Please work in this direction. Try to draw the figure in motion more. Static poses are fine but this course is about movement and how we capture it in a drawing.
Avoid line fills - use line to describe form and light - not color and tone.
Nice tree contour on page 3 - ground it in space by incorporating some grass or leaf elements below it.
Good work.